Audience Feedback
I addressed the focus group and asked for their feedback on my second draft and this is what they had to say:
Anna - I like how the female subject is the main focus of the video as she is pretty and appeals to both male and female audiences. I also like the way she is not being subjected by having a lot of skin on show. However, there is still a lack of narrative which I would like to see. I want to know who the girl is talking to when she says "I kinda wanna go out dancing".
Josh - I like the pace of the editing compared to the first draft. It seems to be a lot tighter and, like Goodwin suggests, the visuals fit the beat. Again the narrative is still lacking and I think to make this more conventional there needs to be some form of narrative.
Lauren - I really like the iTunes visualiser and how it crops up regularly, however, it may be a little overused and the cutaways have not been used enough.
Charlton - I think you need less of the band and more cutaways because although the band looks good it just loses the audience's interest and I think that to keep their attention you need to keep changing the shots so have more cutaways and more story line.
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